Post by Julia on Apr 4, 2010 22:01:15 GMT -5
;D Finished it while watching Kytri-cam. Here it is, called The Story Of Peep.
One morning in the R.E.D base, the team decided that it was a good day for an Omelet breakfast. They took out 12 eggs, and set them on the table.
“ We need more eggs!” Complained the soldier.
“Nuh-Uh! We gotta’ nuff’!“ Replied the Demoman.
As the team argued about eggs, one of the eggs on the table started to shake and roll around. It rolled and twisted until it finally got TOO close to the edge and it rolled right off. Luckily, a nice warm shoe broke its fall. Inside the shoe, the egg twisted and turned.
Crack! The egg, hatched.
“Peep!” The newly hatched chick called.
“See! There are 11 eggs, we need 15!!!!” Soldier and a few others argued.
Later that day, scout came into the kitchen, looking for his shoe. The little chick was in the shoe in the very tip of the shoes’ toes, sleeping.
“ There’s my shoe!!” Scout exclaimed as he looked under the table. He gently slid his left foot into the shoe.
“PEEP!!!” The chick woke up startled, something had pinned down his tail and it wasn’t letting it go! He turned as the shoe started moving and bit the big thing crushing his tail.
“OW!” Scout flung his shoe off and grabbed his foot. “ What the ….?“He walked over to were his shoe had landed and peered inside.
“Peep” He heard a little noise. Scout put his hand in the shoe and felt a little fluffy thing. He grabbed it gently -- Whatever it was, he didn’t want to hurt it by squeezing it too hard-- and pulled it out.
“Peep” The little chick looked up at him from his hand.
“ Aww, how cute! Where did you come from, and how’d you get in my shoe, little fella’?” He patted the chick on the head and giggled, thinking of how it could of got into his shoe.
“Peep peep peep” The chick hopped around in his hand.
“ I think ill call you Peep.” Said scout with a smile. He took off his hat and put Peep on his head, placing the hat back when Peep got comfortable. He ran out in the battlefield and never stopped thinking about the new friend he had just made.
Questions, comments, improvements or corrections?
One morning in the R.E.D base, the team decided that it was a good day for an Omelet breakfast. They took out 12 eggs, and set them on the table.
“ We need more eggs!” Complained the soldier.
“Nuh-Uh! We gotta’ nuff’!“ Replied the Demoman.
As the team argued about eggs, one of the eggs on the table started to shake and roll around. It rolled and twisted until it finally got TOO close to the edge and it rolled right off. Luckily, a nice warm shoe broke its fall. Inside the shoe, the egg twisted and turned.
Crack! The egg, hatched.
“Peep!” The newly hatched chick called.
“See! There are 11 eggs, we need 15!!!!” Soldier and a few others argued.
Later that day, scout came into the kitchen, looking for his shoe. The little chick was in the shoe in the very tip of the shoes’ toes, sleeping.
“ There’s my shoe!!” Scout exclaimed as he looked under the table. He gently slid his left foot into the shoe.
“PEEP!!!” The chick woke up startled, something had pinned down his tail and it wasn’t letting it go! He turned as the shoe started moving and bit the big thing crushing his tail.
“OW!” Scout flung his shoe off and grabbed his foot. “ What the ….?“He walked over to were his shoe had landed and peered inside.
“Peep” He heard a little noise. Scout put his hand in the shoe and felt a little fluffy thing. He grabbed it gently -- Whatever it was, he didn’t want to hurt it by squeezing it too hard-- and pulled it out.
“Peep” The little chick looked up at him from his hand.
“ Aww, how cute! Where did you come from, and how’d you get in my shoe, little fella’?” He patted the chick on the head and giggled, thinking of how it could of got into his shoe.
“Peep peep peep” The chick hopped around in his hand.
“ I think ill call you Peep.” Said scout with a smile. He took off his hat and put Peep on his head, placing the hat back when Peep got comfortable. He ran out in the battlefield and never stopped thinking about the new friend he had just made.
Questions, comments, improvements or corrections?